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二姐的高考

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二姐从小就想当老师,初中毕业后,由于家里成分不好,14岁的她只得回乡当了农民。两年后,她在高中班主任老师邀请下,去了最偏远的山村小学代课。

父亲复职重新走上讲台后,自学几年的二姐向父亲提出了请求,她想读一年高三,然后参加高考。二姐入学后,学习比谁都刻苦,但英语、数学仍跟不上。总分上不去,作为普通考生考大学是有难度的。体育老师看到了二姐的大长腿,建议她考体育专业。

就在体育专业测试前20多天,二姐受伤了。一次训练跳鞍马,她越过鞍马扑到了地上,脸、前胸血肉模糊一片,鲜血染红了身上的白色短袖衫。父亲接回二姐回家休养,母亲一边不遗余力地给二姐补充营养,一边心痛地劝二姐放弃高考。二姐用力咬了咬下嘴唇,倔强地说,不管发生什么情况她都不会放弃高考,母亲看着二姐肿得变形的脸,无奈地摇了摇头。

二姐知道,父亲让她重返校园是多么不易,家里多年的负债生活,再加上我和三姐都已进入中学,全家靠父亲微薄的工资支撑早已举步维艰。虽说在向父亲请求返校时,二姐请求父亲给予她两年时间备战高考,可早一年考上,父亲便可早一年减轻负担。

伤口还没愈合的时候,二姐参加了高考体育测试,出人意料的是,她的专业成绩达到了本科线。专业考试后,她满面血痂投入到紧张的学习中,每天都早起,在操场跑几个圈后回到教室早读,同学们不解地说:“体育都考完了,还要锻炼?”二姐告诉他们,自己养成了早晚训练的习惯。其实,二姐由于长期缺营养导致了严重的贫血,头总是发晕,只有多呼吸一点新鲜空气,大脑才能清醒一点。

高考如期来临,在她去县城参加高考的前一天,母亲去镇上搬回她的行李,看着母亲噤若寒蝉的样子,她还安慰母亲说,她会坦然接受命运的安排。母亲心事重重地回到家后,时不时望着远方发怔,她特别放心不下二姐。

三天高考终于结束了,二姐投入到了紧张的双抢劳动中,母亲跟在二姐后面,想打探一下二姐的高考情况。二姐对母亲说:“我学习、考试的时候都已竭尽全力,现在考过了,我彻底地放下了。”可能正是由于二姐良好的心态,她考出了自己的水平,文化成绩出来后,二姐的文化成绩也上了本科线,后来她上了师范大学。

二姐给我树立了一个好的榜样,多少年来,我总是记着二姐的做事原则,那就是无论做什么事都全力以赴,事后再不纠结。这使我受益良多。

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